Wednesday, January 25, 2012

Birchthorn: Interlude One

E. Mauren was a patient man. A war, 60 years of farming, and 17 grandchildren taught a person to be still when he had to be. He was just outside milking barn's main doors leaning on his cane, staring at one of his favorite jersey heifers standing alone. She was about 300 yards away on a gently sloping hillside. A brown figure surrounded by white, clean, snow nearly at the forest's edge. The heifer had not moved in nearly fifteen minutes he had locked eyes on her. She did not flick an ear, swish her long tail, or lift a hoof. For a healthy second-calf milker to be frozen where she stood was making him was churning his stomach. He remained still as a raptor, watching without so much as a blink. Terrified that if he did he'd miss the movement that would wash him over with sweet relief. The heifer remained a statue. Something wasn't right at White Creek Farm.

He first noticed her away from the rest of the herd when chores started at dawn. He usually liked to have his morning work completed before Sun Up, but today had not allowed the habit. He had risen at the chimes of his brass alarm clock at 4:15, just as he had every morning since he took the farm over from his father after the war. He'd married his girl, had six children, and watched his family blossom here in the Battenkill Valley while he tended his beloved cow. The children were grown, and his dear wife had passed from the flu last winter when it spread through the county like wildfire. He truly believed it was the cows that saved him. That so many years outdoors among the rust, woods, blood, milk, and dung had build an immune system no sickness had touched since he laid in a hospital bed after the battle of Cold Harbor, so many lifetimes ago...

He got dressed in heavy wool and his favorite leather fur-lined cap and started the coffee while he fetched a lantern and lighting supplies from the cabinet. While lighting his favorite black lantern in the farmhouse's kitchen, he was thinking about how much he liked his oil light, how he hated the harsh gas lights of those new Colemans every other dairyman was raving about. He was startled out of his murmuring by a sudden and violent wind that shook the entire home, knocking cans off the shelf and rattling the windows. The fire in the kitchen's hearth spat and howled as the wind caused such a strong draw it shot up and filled the room with orange light. He spilled his metal tin of lamp oil, and sent an angry curse into the room. A torrent of snow screamed across his valley farm. He tried to go outside, but didn't make it five paces before he felt nearly lost in the white-out, chilled into his bones, and turned around and back towards the nearly-diminished light of his kitchen's fireplace. He had never seen such weather. It swallowed everything.

He crawled back inside and shut the door behind him panting, sliding to the floor. He then tried to listen to the farm in the storm. He couldn't hear anything but cloven air and angry branches breaking from the force. He prayed that the herd was near the barn, taking shelter in the sturdy walls his great grandfather built when this country was new. He remained on the floor, and let himself rest his eyes while it blew and fussed behind the 3 inches of maple that made his barrier. Without meaning to, he fell asleep, and when he awoke it was dawn and the farm seemed as unaffected as the stare of the Virgin mother statue outside his garden wall.

When he did start at his morning chores he was calmed at the site of his girls by the old red barn, near their feeders and water trough. He fed them fresh hay by the pitchfork, and noticed they all seemed more skittish than usual. Their eyes showing more of the white than he cared to see. As he pitched what his body could afford, slowly and with much strain, he raised his scratchy voice in a loud, "Home Girls! Home!" hoping to round up all the stragglers up near the tree line, probably taking shelter in the woods from the storm. All came down in their ambling, eager, way save for the brown heifer near the trees. It stood still. And as he called, watched, went about chores and heading inside for a bowl of oatmeal with butter and maple syrup, she remained standing.

And so now it was an hour since he first saw the girl on the hill, and he stood near his barn afraid. His son, who lived on the opposite end of his property—a mile away near the main road into town—would not be here to start morning milking with his sons for another hour. Mauren decided to investigate. He could not wait through the suspense, and if something was wrong he would need to know so to properly convey it to his son. He fetched his shotgun and a few medical supplies into a shoulder satchel and slowly started up the pasture.

Crows watched from high in the birch branches as Mauren slowly climbed the hill. He stopped twice, to look around as much as to catch his breath. Curious? There were no prints in the snow, no disruption at all on the entire hillside. Yet he could see the trails through the powder plainly on the other side of the barn where the cattle ate. he could follow them to places in the forest a half mile away. But not over here? This stretch of snow was virgin ground, save for the tracks he made behind him.

Now, just fifty feet from the heifer he could see she was dead. Dead and frozen where she stood. He had heard stories of this happening, but never saw such a thing in his own life nor knew anyone who had. As he gained on her his curiosity grew. She was, without a doubt, dead as a hammer but she had actually died mid-stride. Two hooves were off the ground reaching forward, and her face placid as a calf's. But something was odd about her front left foot. It was black. It seemed skinnier too? He stopped walking, not ten feet from the animal, and then looked harder. It was bone. The front hoof was nothing but black bone reaching out trying to step. It was clean as glass. No sign of blood, sinew, or skin? Then he noticed the same from the back left leg, planted firmly into 5 inches of snow but also nothing but black clean bones. As he stepped closer, he unintentionally held his breath. His heart pounding in his temples, his eyes wide and mouth agape.

As he turned the corner on the giant animal he clasped his hand into a fist and shoved it into his mouth to bite into it. An involuntary reaction he hadn't succumbed to since the first terrors of war when he was 18. The drastic lurch for his teeth made him drop his shotgun and cane and then didn't even flinch when the buckshot exploded into the dead cow in front of him. The side of the beast facing the forest was gone, save for the black skeleton, perfectly in place as if a surgeon had come in the night and sawed the animal in two. A perfect division right down the spine left one side flesh and the other just bone. It looked as through some how the animal was frozen, picked up, and dipped into deadly acids that perfectly consumed the flesh to the water's level, then lifted out and set back on the ground. The muscle and organs that had been spliced were frozen too, not a drop of blood or a single sick smell filled the air. The bones on the flesh side seemed white, normal. But the bones facing the old farmer were black as if charcoal. He composed himself, reached out to touch the bowl of the shoulder blade, expecting soot on his fingers, but recoiled back his hand at the shock of their metallic firmness. Never in his life had he seen such a sight. Not in books, or side shows, or even posters at the animal doctors' offices. This was abomination.

He reached a rattling hand into his coat pocket, searching for his rosary. He found it, solid ground at last, and started chanting through Hail Marys as he stared into the cavern of the heifer's ribs. Something caught the light, a flash of gold. He leaned forward, slowly, and saw that hanging from a black ribbon was a golden locket. He prayed louder, as if to scream sense into the moment, as if to tame the experience into understanding. As he shouted, HAIL MARY, FULL OF GRACE. OUR LORD IS WITH THEE.." He reached into the black ribcage to remove the small pendant from the bones. It came away gently. It looked identical to the last time he saw it. He could never forget the family heirloom. His wife was buried with last winter.

Shaking now, covered in cold sweat, Mauren took the locket into his cold hands and forced it open. If this really was his wife's jewelry their pictures taken in New York City in Central Park would be inside. His hands were clumsy, cracking, and starting to bleed from the cold but he persisted even through the shaking, his rosary dangling around the black ribbon in his hands. Inside on her side of the locket was his wife. She looked just as he remembered the photo, smiling under a flowering dogwood tree. Then he stopped his persistent prayer. Stood silent in the snow.

His photo was gone.

Catch up on the story:
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3

Birchthorn is a work of community fiction, a story of the Battenkill Valley in 1919 dealing with a mysterious creature of local legend and song. Readers of the CAF farm blog are part of it, becoming characters, names of places, horses, and so forth. Reader comments and suggestions help move the plot along, and create the mystery. Each chapter is supported through donations to the "Story Pot" which is the donate button on this blog, on the right-hand side, under the heart image. If you like what you read, and want to read more, please throw in a dollar or two and leave a comment with your thoughts and ideas. If may become legend!


Blogger Joie said...

This is not meant to be b!tchy at all, quite the contrary, in fact. Initially, I was not a fan of this whole idea. But Jenna, land sakes alive, this interlude has me hooked! Now, to go back and read the opening salvos. Thanks for this lunchtime break :)

January 25, 2012 at 1:00 PM  
Blogger Jenna Woginrich said...


January 25, 2012 at 1:01 PM  
Blogger katiegirl said...

Ok, I hate to be "that person", but I have to do it. If it's a second-calf Jersey, she's a cow not a heifer.

January 25, 2012 at 1:08 PM  
Blogger Allispin said...

this is really gripping - love it!

January 25, 2012 at 1:13 PM  
Blogger Alison said...

My thoughts as I read:

"Interesting...can't wait to find out what's up with that cow."

"Coooooool" (the description of the dead cow)

"What the hell...oh wow!" (The locket)

I really was getting nervous after the whole fist-in-the-mouth bit. If you ever publish this, I'd start with this scene as an intro or prelude--anyone who picks it up will have to keep reading!

January 25, 2012 at 1:50 PM  
Blogger Stacey said...

Ok, so the night interactions with the creature scared me (since I'm scared of the dark, I assumed these would do it more easily). But the suspense and mystery of this one really freaked me out. Well done, Jenna!

January 25, 2012 at 1:58 PM  
Blogger melody_cir said...

OMG, I've been sitting here for 5 minutes in the semi-dark snow-clouded afternoon, with goosebumps all over, and shivering with the heat on. My mind is furiously trying to absorb what happened and what on earth could have caused it. Nothing like what I had been imagining the mystery monster was! Great Job!

January 25, 2012 at 2:05 PM  
Blogger Sassidy Sparks said...

Loved it!

January 25, 2012 at 2:12 PM  
Blogger KellyV (Kelly the Fifth) said...

Well done Miss Jenna. This is wonderful.

January 25, 2012 at 2:45 PM  
Blogger Sarah said...

Hi Jenna, I get so excited every time a new chapter comes out! Just one thought though. I'm having trouble keeping all the characters straight right now. Although your descriptions are beautiful, I would like to see some of the people we've already met get fleshed out in a chapter or two where no one new is introduced. I realize that you know the people you're basing these characters on but since I don't, I would love to see them come alive in dialogue and plot development. Happy writing!

January 25, 2012 at 3:35 PM  
Blogger Kyler and Sylvia said...

Wow, awesome. And very very creative and creepy! Birchthorn certainly is one way to keep people coming back to your already awesome blog, Jenna!

January 25, 2012 at 3:37 PM  
Blogger becky said...

this is a wonderful start to a book if it were ever published and to think we were here watching you write it

January 25, 2012 at 5:23 PM  
Blogger Chautauqua said...

Nicely done; enjoyed over a glass of wine here in Forestville, Chautauqua County, NY, where wine and grape vines keep mosters at bay!

January 25, 2012 at 6:43 PM  
Blogger Jenna Woginrich said...

Thanks all!

January 25, 2012 at 8:45 PM  
Blogger Jenna Woginrich said...

Suggestions and crits are welcome, of course. As for Katie, thank you, I'll update it. I think I heard that term in the recent joel salatin audiobook, thought I may be mistaken? I thought the third calf made a cow.

January 25, 2012 at 8:46 PM  
Blogger Jenna Woginrich said...

As for character and plot, etc. Here is my plan.

1. meet anna and the monsters, neighbors lara and meredith, the lay of town and the Bishops.

2. Interlude, random townsperson.

1. back to core town group a few chapters

2. another interlude, random townsperson.

1. back to core group...

January 25, 2012 at 8:47 PM  
Blogger JeanineH said...

Just to clarify that one thing that Katiegirl pointed out. I've been raising cattle here on the farm and to talk with the neighbouring ranchers I needed the lingo.

"Heifers are female bovines that have NOT had a calf. A heifer will no longer be a heifer after she has had a calf

Which is where she becomes a Cow: a female MATURE bovine that has had a calf. Heifers remain heifers from the day they are born until they have had their first calf."

January 25, 2012 at 9:33 PM  
Blogger jenomnibus said...

Eek! So creepy....I can't figure out what the creature is. Love it!

January 25, 2012 at 9:52 PM  
Blogger Firecracker Farm said...

Leave it to you Jenna to combine farming and horror fiction. Well done.

January 25, 2012 at 10:09 PM  
Blogger sheila said...

Dairy farmers often call a young cow with 2 calvings behind her a 2nd calf heifer. Beyond that they are just called cows. A dairy farmer would never call this cow just a heifer though.... it would be the more specific term, 2nd calf heifer. Heifer, used alone, always refers to a young female bovine that hasn't calved yet.

January 25, 2012 at 11:30 PM  
Blogger sheila said...

Oh to add weight to my previous comment.... I spent the first 30 yrs of my life on an upstate NY commercial dairy farm, milking cows twice a day. Well I wasn't actually milking cows for the 1st 7 or 8 yrs, but I had barn chores by age 4.

Story is creepy... at first I thought the 2nd calf heifer was the victim of a rare winter lightning strike. Now it's appearing more like aliens have done some sampling.

January 25, 2012 at 11:36 PM  
Blogger Dawn said...

Wow! Love the surreal turn the story has taken. Now I think there is no doubt that the creature is not a bear or a Newfie as some thought after Chapter One. Can't wait to see where the story goes. Thank you so much, Jenna.

January 26, 2012 at 4:36 AM  
Blogger katiegirl said...

Dairy people do use the terms first and second-calf heifers, but technically they're cows.

January 26, 2012 at 11:42 AM  
Blogger Meredith A said...

this story is fun, fiction is your thing.

one suggestion - make a very very simple map of the farm, town, and surrouding areas. as in pencil and paper map, the type found on the inside cover of a book.

examples would be the inside cover of winnie the pooh, lord of the rings, or the weirdstone of brisingamen

something super simple to give people a visual of the layout of the land.

as you would say "a geographer, this one" ;)

January 26, 2012 at 12:00 PM  
Blogger Jenna Woginrich said...

that is a great idea Meredith A!

January 26, 2012 at 12:15 PM  
Blogger greendria said...

Awesome story

January 26, 2012 at 1:11 PM  
Blogger Goat Song said...

Oh good heavens.... These just keep on getting better and better! The only downside I see from these, is that now I'm afraid to go outside in the dark. ;) Excellent work, Jenna. Just excellent.

January 26, 2012 at 1:28 PM  
Blogger Karen said...

This has me so intriqued!

January 26, 2012 at 8:51 PM  
Blogger Elizabeth from the Berkshires said...

This is the most gripping section yet! I'm reading this at work (shhh, don't tell!) in a room lit with fluorescent lights, and it still made my heart race. wow.

One thing--(yes, I'm *that person* too)--the term/concept "immune system" seemed a little wrong for the time period to me. Maybe he would use the term "constitution" instead? Others can pitch in whether I'm on track with this or not.

Thanks for letting us be a part of this!!

January 27, 2012 at 1:43 PM  
Blogger Sylvie said...

It just keeps getting better & better! For a bit more suspense you could throw in some crop circles too! lol

January 27, 2012 at 1:57 PM  
Blogger admin said...

Haven't had time to sit down and give this a read since you posted this until now…damn you can tell a tale—what a twist! I'm finding it hard to put on my teacher hat and give you constructive criticism (besides that heifer vs. cow item :-)).

January 27, 2012 at 7:03 PM  
Blogger M said...

Great story, Jenna - I think (hope) that I sent a donation through paypal? Hopefully I did it correctly.

My Dad's Dad had a dairy farm from 1905 until about 1965- when he retired at 80 years old. My Mom's Mom lost two daughters (Anna and Frances) to the Spanish Flu. Years later when my Mom was born, Grandma named her Anna Frances.

Please keep writing!


January 29, 2012 at 7:29 PM  

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